Action plan

Mr. Bush - 
www: well represented with a good group of the main text/subject
LR: more needed on 'how' the representations are constructed. Do some textual analysis of media language of one or two scenes. 

Second page - 
www: you've focused on your question and the kardashians really well
ebi: proof read your work, needs to flow more, refer to theories and more media key words throughout the work instead of all at once

Third page - 
www: great analysis of the opening ceremony, and you've stated the stereotypes well
ebi: you dont repeat yourself a lot 

Level: 3 

I think my critical investigation essay was good, and I have covered most of level 2 in terms of the grading and marks. I just need to make sure I proof-read my work carefully and a couple of times, to many sure my setences flow and there is no spelling or grammar errors. I have research some ways Kim has been portrayed in the media and I could go in more depth with that and give examples from the show itself to make it more realistic, as well as giving different perspective opinions on Kim, and link it to how Kim feels about it and compare the views. I have also included a fair amount of wider context as I've linked it to an historically text. I believe my critical investigstion had included a lot of information in terms of the text, as I had a lot of media key concepts used throughout and had some context and critical debates. I had the understanding of my chosen area of the investigation as of the references made. I had used my research to an extent in the critical investigation and recorded in the bibbliography. I think my critical investigation us at an level 2 at current with 20 marks.


Fourth page -
www: you've included a good use of social information
ebi: add more political information  

Fifth page - 
www: you have examples of reality TV and how the Kardashians are being represented
ebi: add in how it relates to audience and news values more and stereotypes